ok we get it he needs food to eat everyday.

so no talk about the ore or on blacksmithing. with max?

love it. just sad I have to wait on the next book. I can't wait.

do you have to explain how his powers work constantly or do you believe your readers can't remember or do you need that for filling in word count.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

didn't his raven know how to and was going to talk to him days ago.

he could be set free years ago they only did it to please heavenly sect.

how many times are we going to go over their trauma or are you just filling words for the book.

book has become trauma talk trauma talk trauma trauma trauma talk.

the he and she are changing all the time I don't know if someone is male or female. in my opinion all of these Euphemisms and analogies are unnecessary. headache

I tried but all the explanations on everything is to much. a potion does not need a history of it origins for corroding a body. hearing the same info over and over is redundant.

you over explain and re explain everything a bit to much. try I need to do instead of he needs to do on stuff.

great book. 👍 love that it has a 2nd one.

so all those kills and lvs but no cards to lv up his clone or other skills 🤔

lm liking the story but I fell you over explain and reexplain often.

I like it but when you have to read a name that has 4 to 5 words in it kind of becomes a headache.

I love how you pulled up his stats like 3 times in one chapter just to get words in. lol

I listening to the book and every time you use a word like don't or won't the space you put in between the ' destroys the word. like Don tee won tee ahhhhhhhhhh killing me

the extreme and repetitive over dealing has ruined this for me.

very interesting book . I like it