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  • Kamon772
    Kamon7721mth
    Replied to GammaDude1721

    Hello, I am the author of the Summoned to be a Weapon. First let me thank you for review the story. In regards to the characters and storyline. One of the main things I been planning on doing with the the story is reorganizing it so that hopefully makes it easier to keep track of the characters. Actually planning attempt to expand on the existing Kate and Lina parts and possibly adding new ones at the same time. As for Gau and Let recall their lives as Kate and Lina. Honestly have not though about that really. Their human memories as Kate and Lina were the only things they might not regain as everything but as Gau and Let instead.

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    Summoned to be a Weapon
    Fantasy · Kamon772
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  • Kamon772
    Kamon7724mth
    Replied to UndeadBeing

    Hello, this is the author of Summoned to be a Weapon. I would first like to thank you for reading and reviewing my story as you have done. In regard to your review, I have written these replies: [A few problems though, the male lead is honestly a little too controlling. The twins are nice.] The twins are the two female main characters of this story. Rangi, the male main character of the story, does not appear at least currently until around chapter 9. There is a male character that appears before chapter 9 named Cruz Dusti however though they have a role in the story it is more akin to that of a side character than a major character. Their role was just one of one for dealing with what happened after the twins had been turned into weapons yet were dormant until first awakened by Rangi. [the sentence structure, grammar, and chapter setup is bad] I am aware of my grammatical and spelling shortcomings however at the moment perfecting them is not as simple as just doing it though. As for the character set up I have already gone through the process of attempting to make it more streamlined already. What comes next is merely carrying out the changes that I have made to the overall story itself. [went to a different scene, then repeated the scene] The repeated scenes might possibly be similar scenes but the intent is to show them from different view points. [the main character seemingly changes, that or we get a new character out of the blue.] Though to address 'the main character changes and new character out of the blue issue' as the twins and Rangi are the three primary main characters however there are other main characters besides them. I would like to know a little more detail than what you have provided currently to address the issue properly.

    altalt
    Summoned to be a Weapon
    Fantasy · Kamon772
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