Zeldris_666

Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate your perspective. Regarding the worldbuilding, I tried to establish a strong foundation early on to support the long-term plot development. However, I understand that some readers prefer a more immediate focus on character development and action. Good news: after chapters 58-60, the worldbuilding becomes much lighter and the story shifts focus to characters and personal conflicts. The Shadow Force arc (Chapters 66-82) has minimal heavy worldbuilding. As for similarities to Conqueror Path - while there are inspirations from the same genre (system + harem), this story has its own unique twists with meta-plots, dual protagonists, and a different narrative direction. I hope to keep surprising you! 😊 Thanks again for taking the time to share your thoughts. Feedback like this helps me grow as a writer!

Glad you liked it, thank you

Glad you liked it, thank you

Thank you for the feedback! I admit that chapters 1-59 did take a lot of reference from that novel, so it's understandable if it feels familiar or repetitive. But I guarantee that starting from chapter 60, the story changes completely—the plot, characters, and story direction have become my own. If you'd like, please continue reading and see the difference! 😊

Hello! Thank you for the feedback! Noted on the female heroes' pacing—I'll make sure not to drag it out too much when they reach 100 affection. And don't worry, the plot about the divine realm and Zeref's family background is already in the plan for future chapters. Appreciate the input! 🙏"

Thank you so much! Glad the story keeps you curious. As for Zeref's identity, it will be revealed gradually—there are still many mysteries that will unfold in the upcoming chapters!

"Thank you for the feedback! I admit that chapters 1-59 did take a lot of reference from that novel, so it's understandable if it feels familiar or repetitive. But I guarantee that starting from chapter 60, the story changes completely—the plot, characters, and story direction have become my own. If you'd like, please continue reading and see the difference! 😊"

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