LinhMieu

Yea the grooming is weird and a 4 year old at that.

The story is quiet good. However, I have high doubt on the author that claim to write this. I read enough Chinese to see Chinese pattern written all over this. No issue with Chinese novels since this one is quiet good, but unless the author is one, I find it hard to believe he wrote this.

Nah keep it, the fact you wrote a lot in every chapter and like other said, don't sounds ai is a great blessing. Don't overburden yourself and move forward.

After 200 chapters, I must say this is a fresh take compared to other super hero novel. I disagree with others that nothing happened. Just because the mc is not constantly doing super hero things doesn't mean nothing is happening. The mc just very conscious about using his super power and don't want to be a hero or villian. That is the whole premise of the novel being a lazy superman. You already knew before reading so why complain when he did just that. Now, I do understand that this novel is not flawless. There are moments when mc can solve many things just by using his super powers but simply refuse. I think if the author should've make the mc weak from the start and grow stronger slowly by absorbing the sun light then a lot of plot hole make more sense than I can do it but I won't. There are some parts of the novel seems to be stretched out as well. Overall, the novel is not perfect but a fresh take and an enjoyable read.

I think others saying the arc is boring is correct. Like I'm down for character building and whatnot, but small scale mission is not avenger style. If you watch the movie, they came in fighting tanks like a small scale war. Why are we spending so much time going through plans for small fries just to find Wanda and Peitro? What worse is zero action, where the action?

I'm a big anime fan, but goddamn am I glad I never watch this anime if I feel this emotional reading this fanfic.

Is it bad that now I allergic to any 67 bullcrap? Like that's the first thing I think of when I saw Shank bounty. Too much brain rot these days.

You can be descriptive but the plot needs to go forward. 3-4 chapters of just arriving to Naruto world and go to rain village. The only actions were Danzo, which resulted in nothing (make sense but still) and running.

no hate but if you want to be a droplet in the ocean go Harem. If you want to write a good story go single or no romance. So far, I haven't find a single fanfic that has both good story and harem. Harem ended up taking too much time from a good novel.

Yea, it sucks but he's fine. The fanfic is fire, and he got 300 paid members so understandable.