Lumos22

it's so rushed

Writing like football players only reacts to you if you are a certain race. This is football, my guy. No one underestimates a player due to race. Age, yes, not race. It's impossible to read this without feeling cringeworthy. How its so forced into the story.

author seems to believe everyone is racist towards Indians.

kinda getting repetitive

your pt way too high

isn't it too early though