The_WritingSystem

i hope you can continue

Well This is a ritual for motivating me💪😁

actually the story is good but the execution and the writing is bad

wait what !!!!

I think the iconic lines of yorichii is not this righyt? what is so funny, what is so amusing !! what do you take the lives for other for something like that

well it's not the problem of Chinese fanfics it's the problem of the people. Even though this is only a fanfic some people deviate from original form of the characters. Eg: Actually hirizen is like Dumbledore but in fanfics he is the villain. OBITO is broken, a bit psychopath because of his life tragedy and sharingan but in fanfics he is coward Madman etc. by exploring the depth of these characters we could create a new Naruto but has the tendency to change their foundation

is this the comic steve

cursed technique: eyes of mahoraga

how about dharmachakra in eyes like sharingnan

Well as per the fanfic alvin may be the mc but dont forget the orginal one. Show some respect