Weaving_That

Terribly confusing and illegible. Events that begin, but don't end, entire conversations in the middle of action. Then the action ends completely and it's as if it never happened. It's a disaster.

If you can create clones perfectly capable of living their own lives and therefore also capable of creating clones someday, wouldn't that statistically speaking almost certainly make you a clone yourself of a even greater and most powerful you?

Overall, I love this fanfic. Right now it's the only reason I keep visiting Webnovel and it's to give it gems. It's very well written, the romance is on point, and the relationship between Venom and Hinata is fun to watch. 10/10

I love it, please keep cooking. Tall, muscle girls are my favorite thing and this is really good. My favorite part is Hinata and Naruto's relationship, I just want Shippuden to come because at this point with Naruto this young It feel weird for some reason

You might get jinxed for not reading that it's a translation of another fanfic, but the truth is, this is way better. The protagonist isn't an "insert Chinese guy here"; he has personality and a story, is much better written, and the development of scenes and situations is much better. I feel like sometimes the other story seeps into this one too much, creating situations that made me realize it was a Chinese origin story without reading your review. Overall pretty good and made me go to bed late.

ngl I don't know enough about prisons to know they're divided by gender. It doesn't make sense and it makes sense at the same time, I guess.

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Sometimes I wonder if I'm single-minded. Instead of writing a fanfic about a world I know well, I write a fanfic about a novel I read eight years ago. m I recently watched the movie again and basically had to rewrite chapter 3.

Thank you!

Fun story. However, I don't think I like your writing style. Too many thoughts, too many cuts in the action that ruin the immersion, too many words lost in reactions and surprises. While I'm sure it has its audience, it's not my cup of tea. Good luck. ^.^