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where's da chapter?

One of the first good first-person written chapters

The story is quite nice, but there are some errors in grammar. You also use the name of the mc too much. The writing style isn't that immersive because of the lack of descriptions. Otherwise it's quite good.

here too, it should be you're and not your

you're not your

This story is an excellent one. It's rather new so I don't have many words to speak about it. I would recommend you to give it a read if you see this review.

Excellent story writing style. The world building is not too fast and it is extremely interesting. I would recommend you read it. The characters have been described in detail and it is very immersive.

I am giving 5 stars to encourage the author. His story telling is good but he needs to check his grammar and read it for errors. Good luck author, with some more work you can do excellent.

The story is well written. There aren't too many chapters yet but it seems entertaining so far. I hope the story continues to get better as the chapters are uploaded.

Well something else would happen if they tried that.

Wow she has a terrible family

Her father is the king so how does this make sense?

You could've made the crowd hurl insults about her conspiring with the demon king.

Anyone can block a tribulation, but they would probably die in the process.

There are special circumstances, you will see later.

It's not the skeleton speaking, the voice to them comes from nowhere.

They don't have the items required to test affinities, they are geniuses because of their cultivation level. There's a remnant of the cultivator whose tomb it is. He can control the formations still and he would be able to stop others.

They got lucky and discovered the tomb. The pills they are using aren't much for them, but to a regular person it would be expensive.

He's less injured and less tired.