ZenraSins

It's nice to see the wise mode in Hashirama's style being used, it's always the toads' mode, it's quite annoying

frankly I don't know at all where this fic is going it's a nameless mess you introduce the xmen as well as the brotherhood of mutants to make the aliens disappear in dark Phoenix who found it interesting have more news of them jean survived but have not seen it at all you created two characters for the powers that Syd uses but what is the point, there is also the hunt for the guy who controlled base 23? who disappeared there is also the fact that everyone has forgot the fact that #37 is Messi I remember you said the police asked if they had seen Syd I even wonder if you are lost with this fic you don't know what to do with it so you integrated syd into the mcu to finish it quickly without abandoning the fic

I want to see the next chapter so bad but I really thought Harry was going to wield gram it would have been cool if he used a legendary sword after that it might have been too strong

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Really not incredible the mc is forgettable I hope he will evolve and that the final couple is with Buffy but given how it's going I think I'm having false hope

Chief, when will the story continue?

To tell the truth, he has a relevant trait that puts him in Slytherin, it's not his cunning but his ambition, his desire to prove that he is someone

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No it's not giving up but it's slow for updates

The story is not bad but it is not good either the beginning was good and remained coherent whether in relation to the behavior of the MC but the story started to deteriorate from the moment you skip a fucking year where he learns to be an animagus and the release of Sirius from that moment the story no longer makes sense already starting with the fact that the relationships he has for example with Susan and Hanna who have disappeared then there is the relationship between the MC and Harry at the beginning he had no resentment but from the 4th year the MC despises him and you don't know why there is also the behavior his behavior with Sirius the MC literally says that he will not trust him then after they have a father son relationship another weird thing about it is that he doesn't trust Sirius because he doesn't want to marry a stranger already we're talking about Sirius the pure blood who doesn't care about that but the PC doesn't trust him because he doesn't want it to be Harry who becomes the heir why is he worried about that wealth he doesn't care about creating a metal with alchemy in addition being the heir prevents him from becoming better in magic and then there is the behavior of the MC he was put in Ravenclaw but throughout the story he behaves like a Slytherin