SerpentiCat

Hey, author man, there's a couple things I would like to go over here even though this comment is unlikely to be read by anyone really. I will probably write some of it again on newest chapter when I get there. Firstly, I noticed you doing something in this and previous notes that I really don't appreciate and what I think doesn't do you any good. What I'm talking about is generalizing, lumping your readers together, all of them. In my opinion you really shouldn't mix the appreciative attentive fans with the venom spitting shit stain cretins. The former doesn't deserve it and the letter should be ignored. You see, WebNovel, in my honest opinion, is about the worst sites to post a story on. The majority of users at best are judgemental and vocal about it, and at worst: incapable of comprehension, horribly entitled, bigoted and vicious human refuse. Of course that's not all readers here but majority nonetheless. This is why I just don't understand why there are any actually good quality stories here. People have not respect for authors work here and there are numerous better alternatives. I myself would never post anything here beyond a redirect with some initial sample chapters. I would really advise you to move your story to another site. The one kind of an issue is the quality of english your story is written in because it's somewhat limiting your options. That's because on better sites people have unfortunately have less tolerance for bad quality of written language because there's large selection of well written interesting stories. There's two things you can do if you want to move to better sites. Those two things are: involving a fluent english speaking editor in th etransfer of this story, OR including clear preferably english speaker edited notices about the imperfect quality of the language, naturally including information that the story is actually considered well written and interesting, and so worth at least a try. Now about the site options. There are the fanfic giants: fanfiction.net and ArchiveOfOurOwn. Naturally there are other options with small/partial focus on fanfics, like RoyalRoad, ScribbleHub, and the fora: Space Battles, Sufficient Velocity and Questionable Questing. For unedited story with appropriate notes the best options are probably ScribbleHub and RoyalRoad. They have fanfic selection smaller than the rest and there isn't as much attention on those so people have smaller expectations. I would certainly be happy to read this story elsewhere and you, author, would likely appreciate much less toxic reader base.

Same thing here. Why is it giving less weakness removal cars per roll to the point it gives only 1?

Yup, this truly makes no sense. Why is it giving 1 power boost card per roll. It gave around 3 before and this gacha is supposed ramp up with time so why does look like power boost card rolls got worse?

Yes he did. Super Ball is the namrein author's native language and so this mistake slipped in. This comment was one of a series pointing out the appearance of super balls for corrections. The issue is when a chapter is updated paragraph comments are lost and the post date is overrode with update date. WN sucks per usual. The end.

As in the show's timeline? If so then you're off by 10 years. x784 my friend.

When did Alfonso temporarily lose sight in this life?

The big question is: can Alfonso manipulate motion and structure of metal from a distance or does he need to be in physical contact with it and can only manipulate its structure? Depending on the answer copying Magneto may or may not be possible.

Isn't storm release water and lightning mix though? I can never remember if it's that or a trio with wind. So anyway this might be the reason you thought so. Or maybe some fanfic author combined Kumo's lightning release with Gyuki's water release theme. Actually wasn't it raining/storming during pre Killer B Gyuki's jinchuriki breakout flashback? … Why the hell do I even remember that scene. Brain… I'm disappointed with your priorities.

Yeah, I have to agree that Elicia pushing Alfonso to agree to Laxus' demands is not a good thing and an odd choice from someone who knows what he is going to be like without positive intervention. The only possible explanation I can think of for why she does that would be her being mentally stuck on Laxus post his attempt at take over of the guild. It's not a good reason for her behavior but it would explain things.

I'm not sure what you are uncertain about here.