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Andrew_Hall_6400

Andrew_Hall_6400

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2022-12-07 JoinedUnited States
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  • Andrew_Hall_6400
    Andrew_Hall_64008mth
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    You should introduce The Nameless or Shrii-ka-rai (Eaters of the Force), as they are creatures that preyed on Force-sensitive individuals

    Ch 36 The Lost Fett
    Predator of Star Wars: Hunt
    Movies · GoldDragonMachina
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  • Andrew_Hall_6400
    Andrew_Hall_64008mth
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    Readers*

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
    Building an Empire in Game of Thrones
    War · Dr_Dred
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  • Andrew_Hall_6400
    Andrew_Hall_64008mth
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    Good story so far. Just a quick suggestion when you do an authors note please put it in either brackets or parentheses so that way the reads can distinguish between the two and not get confused.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
    Building an Empire in Game of Thrones
    War · Dr_Dred
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  • Andrew_Hall_6400
    Andrew_Hall_64008mth
    Replied to holson_Charles

    I just read a book that was dumber than this because in 30 chapters that author did not add a single status point to his MC’s strength and just though that speed and dexterity would be simply sufficient

    Rise of the White Dragon
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Andrew_Hall_6400
    Andrew_Hall_64008mth
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    Overall story is okay but really almost thirty chapters and the MC didn’t increase his strength. Does the author think that strength isn’t needed for a bow?

    Ch 29 Running away
    Unlimited Power 02 - The Ranger's Domain
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Andrew_Hall_6400
    Andrew_Hall_64001yr
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    I’ve read this one TAPAS and I am on chapter 202 on there and I can tell you that the story is badass as fuck and it’ll continue to get better

    The Devil Butler
    · WuErComics
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