turtle_feez

The book is rather interesting as the chapters go by, I like the slow character introductions and how their personality renact through words. Descriptive, where I can imagine the setting, but it does get slightly confusing while rereading some parts in order for me to understand what's going on (like the nicknames etc of Kai and Keir?.) maybe you're trying to piece the loopholes missing in order the story would make sense and be fixed in a straight direction but try to be clear and go straight to the point. Overall, I like the wise choice of words put in the character's dialogue, intricate details observed and how humour is added inside. Can't wait to read more :)

COOLLL