Reverend_mysteries

meh

love the long chapters

my honest opinion After Reading these 13 chapters. to be honest, the quality of this work surprised me, i expected It to be written if not badly, at most decently, but instead It feels like the author got experience, the only thing that i don't like Is the setting, it's wayyyy too basic, the Classic bastard son with commoner mother, evil siblings/stepmother and a useless father that for "some reason" can't to anything. but yeah, other than the overly basic setting i'll Say this Is an 8/10. take my rating with a pinch of salt tho, since i can't really judge a book by it's First chapters because those are the easiest to write, and the more you write the harder It will be to keep the plot going without the story becoming either boring or repetitive, thus i lowered the rating, i Hope It keeps being entertaining in the future too, and if you wanna listen to my advice, you could add some character development by other characters as the chapters go by, It will at least partially remove the "basic" setting. still a great find tho, i'm adding this in the library and see if It will be a flop or a bomb👍

novel aside, this Is real, and It happens in real life, that feeling of superiority and certainty of achieving success, Just for It to come crashing down After a few days because there Is no more adrenaline left. Author, you know your stuff It seems

cmon bruh Just say it

what does "hitherto" mean?

"the sword Is a tool meant to kill, thorfinn"

how does he even know