why? is something wrong?

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thank you

lol creeps are always around

😅

Nice!! but Akuma is a creep how could he kiss Chiko in front of everyone?!!

GOJO?!!!

:( my heart broke there.

Overall its going great but Author needs to check spell mistakes and correct word usage like using cliche where clique is used.cliche means common plot but clique means group of people with same interests

Hello! this is the author here. I would like to let you know that I will be editing and updating the chapters up until first 40-50 chapters. As it's my first time writing a novel, there might be few mistakes in my writing skills. And I will constantly try to mend them. Do share your thoughts in reviews.

i will try to meet ur expectations 😊

thanks i know he's crazy one that's why he's male lead😜

I'm reading this as the opening of dragon ball z 😂

Thanks alot

you'll know it soon and trust me there's more to it.

oh I guess I'll have to work on it. thanks fr telling

Alright, it's crazy how the author wrote the movements of a character. I can actually visualize them in my head. The writing quality is great and I'm yet to familiarize with some aspects of the story, So I gave this rating. [img=recommend]

Glad you like it and tnx fr support

Glad you like it

Man! its first chapter and I'm already hooked. The world building a character's details are awesome. the way the story went, and the way blood and snow are described in there is so real that I felt the pain of hers. Keep it up its great