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Tsleem_shk
Tsleem_shkLv21yr
2023-07-25 15:50

Man! its first chapter and I'm already hooked. The world building a character's details are awesome. the way the story went, and the way blood and snow are described in there is so real that I felt the pain of hers. Keep it up its great

Rise of the Paragon Villain

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153 Chs

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Thank you so much🙇‍♀️

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The world-building in the first seven chapters is commendable, offering glimpses into a society where political disputes, academic rivalries, and family dynamics intersect to create an intriguing backdrop for the unfolding events. The introduction of individuals with extraordinary powers adds an element of fantasy and sets the stage for potential conflicts and alliances in the future. For those who enjoy mysteries with intricate character development and a touch of fantasy, this novel is bound to be a rewarding and unforgettable read.

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A captivating read, to say the least. The author spins an intricate web of intriguing characters, complex relationships, and a magical world that pulls you in from the very first chapter. Despite being only 5 chapters in, the depth and detail of the world-building is truly remarkable, making it a compelling and immersive experience. The plot unfurls at a perfect pace, ensuring the reader remains engaged without feeling overwhelmed. It's clear that every element of the story has been meticulously crafted, resulting in a truly enriching reading experience.

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Really is a great work, the writing is amazing, the world-building is quite something, to say the least as it is very special. You seem to update fairly frequently at that and you can really explain the characters well.

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Unique. If I were to describe this novel in one word, that will be it. The character design was well thought out; they have their own pros and cons that made them realistic and interesting. The world background was also amazing and there's more than meets the eye. The pacing was great, it develops not too slow or not too fast. I can say that the author really planned each chapter. I rarely read FL stories but this book got me hooked. Keep writing author!

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Really a five stars gem i just start Reading the novel and became a huge air conditioner not a fan but a huge air conditioner.the synopsis is great the way author engage the characters is another level of awesomeness.

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Although there are only 7 chapters but I'm hooked up and looking forward to it Keep it up mate[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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I love the overall premise of the book. The plot seems interesting and the author does a good job in hooking the readers. This book is action-packed from the veryyy begining and will leave you wanting for more and aching to know what would happen next. Although there are still a few chapters published, I'm sure this has potential to be one of the best books. ♥️♥️♥️

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Great opening, wonderful imagery, and excellent use of all the senses. The grammar is excellent, writing quality high and compelling! I think this author has good plans for where the story is going.

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