Have to find job right now have no money,sorry to disappoint you.

well a spear also refers to a gun so this leads to this confusion, I will change if this causing confusion.

modified it, thx bro

SORRY TO SAY BUT AM NOT CONNECTED TO IT BUT WHEN I WILL I WILL INFORM ON MY PROFILE.

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new and refreshing concept the author has introduced I really like the how story unfolds up till now good work. well, I may not be the best at reviewing but as a reader I like it.

thx for reviewing as for long paragraphs I would love to but they are mostly conversations so it is a bit difficult. As for an editor when have newbie has money hire editor joke apart, you have my sincere thanks for reviewing once again

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Too short give it 5 stars but after 2 chapters I still find it interesting so I will leave 5 stars. as for suggestions well for the author, he can try to be more detailed about the event.

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well appreciated bro

well let's see story development is at a good pace neither fast nor slow world-building is on a good foundation. characters have more alive personalities you will find it interesting.