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I'll try to come back next year, maybe then the story will have moved.

Hm... The amount of circles in these last 6 chapters is astonishing. Sad. ..

Hello the dear author. You have a gold mine here but I advise you to dig it carefully. I noticed this a few chapters before but the first 1/5 or 1/4 of the chapetrs now are the same thing of the last bit of the last one in a roundabout way and the chapter turned to info dump or introspections, I'm not saying that those are not necessary but thread carefully because it makes people interest to wane (my case). If necessary you should adjust the release schedule to give a more robust content. But so far I like and am following your story.

Until now I'm liking the storytelling, all kinds of characters from dumb to normal to the somewhat intelligent like normal ppl are not just dumb other than the protagonist. My friend (author) keep going you're doing well don't drop this book like the others.

I like the premise (same as my three wives...)but I will wait for more free chapters to say something definitive.

Hm I like the premise. I like this kind of OP evolution transformations system. I like to shut off my brain and just enjoy but sometimes ita difficult. Too many inconsistencies in the power system and characters behavior but maybe I'm rambling since I only read the free chapters. I hope the author have been improving along the writing.

Ah these cliffhangers someday...

Sorry, "...and hey did not see what the knight did..."

"... and they didn't (did not) see/know what he/it did, the monsters just froze and..." *

Ahhhh I want More... A 100 chpts mass release please