VERYY GOOD

Me gusta mucho la historia, este Jon es feroz, algo que siempre me ha frustrado donde canon lo muestra tímido y pasivo prácticamente todo el show

Creo que sería bueno poner algunos puntos de vista antes de continuar con Jon para explicar cómo la gente está reflexionando sobre las situaciones, especialmente sobre Ned Stark en prisión, quien en los libros piensa en este momento sobre la promesa que hizo para proteger a Jon antes que su hermana. murió O ver lo frustrada que está Cersei por perder a Arya en un barco que se dirige al norte. O alguien pensando en lo tonta que puede ser Catelyn.

hello friend, I understand your criticism, I rewrote it back, but I haven't posted it yet. This one will be deleted

Hi, thanks for your suggestion, I'm rewriting the episodes, I considered bringing Jon as an archmage in alteration at least

I fixed it, thanks

it was supposed to be waepon, but i fixed it here. Thanks

I fixed here, sorry

hahaha sorry, I fixed the term here, I put it wrong

I admit I don't like harem; however, I'll do with this one, but the romance will be the minimum possible, I still won't reveal your companions as the story progresses.

Yes, as a big fan of battle history, I couldn't pass up this opportunity.

I intend to leave it with Aegon, since Viserys Targaryen, spoke of the prince or conquering before he died, in the midst of doubts I will leave Aegon himself, however the name will take time to appear, I'm thinking of assuming a Blackfyre name before even.

about wives, I'll put it like this, who is my favorite woman in the books. But who would Jon Snow be without an Ygritte, right?

Hi, do you know what I hate most about Game of Thrones.? It was that the threat of the long night came from season one to end in just one battle in Winterfell. I intend to put a long night here in my standards with hundreds of thousands of wights, white walkers with superhuman strength and agility and a cunning Night King, not the one from Winterfell who simply when the battle was already won decided to show up to die for Arya .

Friend, thanks for the questions, I actually wanted a character not too powerful, I wanted to avoid Skyrim magic at all costs, but after reflection I'll put the basics on him