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Sacul_823419dReplied to Fry_ladTell me 7
"Ah, Lord Narsis." I greet the Altmer with false cheer, my happy smile slowly twisting into a predatory grin "So nice of you to finally join us."- Sacul_82341mthPosted
I really liked the beginning and idear behind it. However the harem part destroyed the strory for me. Romance ok! I could even overlook the fact that it is between 12/13 year olds and an adult(mind) even thought it is creepy. But the author had to take all females in the Potterverse and pushes it to the front instead of the story development itself. Also the MC is way to powerful in every way possible and that to fast. The translator makes a good job and I hope he translates some other work in the future. Maybe not a harem one ;)
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Good luck
I'll definitely update you if I pass my interview on the 28th, as they will declare the results on the same day. Truthfully, I have the skills for the job role, but the issue is confidence. I've had this type of interview before, in February, for a different role, but the process was similar. I think I failed that interview because of my lack of confidence. This time, I'm pretty fired up and will try to pass. The process will take 5-7 days, and if I fail on day 1, I won't be able to proceed to the next round. - Sacul_82345mthCommentedCh 158 Chapter XXI: Onwards To The Rift!
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[Let us have a minute of silence, for the loss of an innocent soul.] - Sacul_823410mthCommentedCh 88 Chapter 87
- Sacul_823411mthCommentedCh 41 41: The Dueling Club
- Sacul_823411mthCommentedCh 116 CORN IS BACKKKK!!!
- Sacul_82341yrCommentedCh 23 Chapter 22: fat bastard
- Sacul_82341yrCommented
Do we really need her? He has more than enough woman with out her. Dont really see the appeal to include her in the harem.
If he died his hot-as-sin mother would no longer like Aerion, she in canon is dead now but it never said how or why just like Rhaena so I just kept them alive and chalked it up to butterfly effect. But if Aerion cuts down Daemon here while they are both still 'young' lots of things will need changing. - Sacul_82341yrCommented
Up to this point the story is well done. I really hope you dont go over the top like you did in your other Fanfiction. Throwing every woman and family member at the mc ruins the story. I dropped your other fiction after he slept whith his aunts and mothers of his real loveintersts. I mean even Targaryens have some restrain and even more so, if they have more than enough potential partners among their agegroup who are more than willing to help him with his little problem and really like him. Sorry for the little runt but I really hate it when a good plot and lovestory is destroyed because the author has to throw all woman that exist at the mc. I am not a big Fan of harem and finding one that has great potential is really rare but in the end it is up to you.
Ch 18 18 R18? - Sacul_82341yrCommentedCh 695 Chapter 695 Another way (2 in 1)detailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
- Sacul_82341yrCommentedCh 694 Chapter 694 Counterfeiting (2 in 1)detailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat