Poipiv

The story is pretty decent, other than some issues in over explaining and being repetitive in a way that feels like the writer is just trying to hit a word quota. The biggest issue I have is with the complete inconsistent updates, rarely are updates posted every day for maybe 2 weeks and I'm feeling confident and invested enough to buy into the locked chapters for the month and then they stop posting for 2-3 weeks making maybe one or two posts in the next week or two. It would be fine if the writer updated saying they are going on break or whatever or warn they don't post often, but there's nothing I've seen of them addressing their trash update schedule, are you sick? writers block? busy with life? what's going on? I like the story and wish for more but it feels like such a waste of time to wait a week for 1 update I won't be able to read for 2-3 months because that's just how long it takes for the writer to update enough to get passed the locked chapters I'm at.

These last few chapters have been really rough to read, full of inconsistent scaling and wording that makes no sense that contradicts someone said a few lines prior or a chapter prior. It just feels like I'm trying to grab a cloud with my hands. Like how big is this place? I thought it was coming off as a trading city which feels like having millions of people still around after months of the blockade and constantly getting attacked should be much less, there's just no scale for anything and gets really confusing. North supposedly bombed a mountain earlier which was clarified that he was protecting people from the blast which was great, but what about the city? aren't they fighting right above the center where people are evacuating? are they hundreds of kilometers above them or something to not be affected from the constant explosions and ridiculous powers that seem to bend space it's self constantly? turning everything directly to ash when the bad guy powers up with his manifestation which is supposed to be stronger than the paragon (who can already cover the whole city with his manifestation) can't break past like a hundred meters? buildings are blowing up, the earth is shattering and all these bunch of convoluted expressions , how are normal people not just exploding from the shock waves? how are the clouds disappearing every couple of exchanges? what the hell do you mean by circular canyon, you mean a crater? if the bad guy is dissolving everything around and under him, that means he's on the ground and going deeper and deeper as the fight goes on? this is all stuff that's confusing to read when it is described as something big and impressive but it just seems like describing a nuclear bomb exploding and describing it ionizing the atmosphere and ripping atoms apart and having a shockwave destroy all the buildings around it and then when the dust settles it only amounts to the same damage as a firecracker, everything in these last few chapters seems over exaggerated for nothing to really happen, also the bad guy turns everything to ash and makes things disappear with no fancy effects most of the fight and then all of a sudden a big move makes dust fly everywhere? just really poor chapters for being so descriptive, with things like collapsing star and whatever, sounds cool but everything around it is disappointing and confusing, you don't need cool sounding words for a good story, just needs a bit better consistent world dynamics

Can't read past a few pages, it's headache inducing to make sense and mentally correct incorrect common sayings and references.

Must be related to my favorite Dragon Ball character.. Fajita

this is so inconsistent, 2 chapters ago they literally said he agreed to the magic guild quest 'departing tomorrow' then he goes to tell the principal he can't go to the assessment and now he is the main organizer and spend days and days on that completely worried about the out come? being dragged by the principals pace and completely disregarding something he just agreed with seems super out of character, when he supposedly doesn't go back on his word, on top of the complete disconnect from 2 chapters ago, you could of explained it like he split with his magic shadow clones leaving one at the school and he's doing all this while on the way to the duchy or something.

So far it's pretty interesting to read, my biggest issue is how redundant 1/3 of every chapter feels, and how short they are. Once one thing is explained in a paragraph the next one or the one after is the same explanation just worded slightly different, and makes it feel like you are more interested in hitting a word count minimum than progressing the story.

Don't worry about me, I just like reading the latest chapter of the novels I'm into, I normally read them with in the hour it's posted if I can 👍

What even is the last 1/3 of this chapter?