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Thx for the chap😊😊

Thanks for the chap

thanks for the chapter

wth is that?🤧

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Wow, you mean on your own view? 'cause it's okay to me. But it's understandable, all fingers aren't the same. You'll find a good story to read brother.

After a careful reading from A to Z of the chapters available, I took note of the following. This is according to what I read, so don't comment here if what I read is different from what you read. The MC is still immature to me, probably because of his age but it's normal for someone of that age. He's hadn't been able to associate himself in the public so it's understandable that he couldn't talk anyhow as he's trying to learn from what others are saying. That's like calling him an introvert trying to become an extrovert. But you guys want him to become an extrovert all of a sudden which is wrong. I'm glad the author didn't turn him into an extrovert all of a sudden. The MC is going according to the flow of the story, which is awesome. He is the type of character that suits the plot of the story. Then in the future he will take steps and say things of wisdom which will incredible surprise others and himself. Second thing I noticed is that the story is not talking all about being strong or system all the time. It is just like a normal story and if an incident is about to happen, the author would bring up the system to make him overcome the problem and by chance might make him grow stronger when the problem has been overcame. That's all I have to say and sorry I would have given you full star but giving full star all the time is stressful to me and it's more respectful if I put it this way. This is my second review, I hope it helps you in a good way. By the way, your books are amazing, keep it up!

This is my very first review but I'll say that this book is really wonderful. Although there are some errors which I would like the Author to try and correct. I'll pinpoint them in my chapter comments. Thank you!👌💛💚💜