Great_Disaster
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Great_Disaster1yrCommentedMage needed magic, in other words, mana to use spells. His Rewriting Fate needs Mana go function.
[Low Tier Role - Mage.]- Great_Disaster1yrPosted
- Great_Disaster1yrPosted
I give you 4.8 stars. the story is good. well structured and has a sense of rhythm. I liked how you portrait Artemis, although we only had one chapter of him, he gives me the Aura of a strict wise old man. the character of Icarus is not well known among the writing community, I gotta congratulate you for having the Nevers of steel to write him. looking forward to new chapters. after all this is - 👇
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not Mysterious at all 😂😂☠️
Gods, humans, anything walk upon her physically body and had a gull to look down on her. She clicked her tongue, she is going to show them 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐢𝐬. And like that she dissapeared in a furry of Flower petal and dissapeared from the world foever, 𝙊𝙧 𝙨𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙖𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝𝙩. - Great_Disaster1yrCommentedCh 1 Icarus