Great_Disaster
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Great_Disaster1yrCommentedMage needed magic, in other words, mana to use spells. His Rewriting Fate needs Mana go function.
[Low Tier Role - Mage.]- Great_Disaster1yrPosted
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I give you 4.8 stars. the story is good. well structured and has a sense of rhythm. I liked how you portrait Artemis, although we only had one chapter of him, he gives me the Aura of a strict wise old man. the character of Icarus is not well known among the writing community, I gotta congratulate you for having the Nevers of steel to write him. looking forward to new chapters. after all this is - π
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not Mysterious at all ππβ οΈ
Gods, humans, anything walk upon her physically body and had a gull to look down on her. She clicked her tongue, she is going to show them π°π‘π¨ π¬π‘π π«πππ₯π₯π² π’π¬. And like that she dissapeared in a furry of Flower petal and dissapeared from the world foever, ππ§ π¨π€ π©ππ π’ππ£ π©ππ€πͺπππ©. - Great_Disaster1yrCommentedCh 1 Icarus