I definitely like this book. It has great writing quality and I didn't notice any mistakes spelling-wise, same with grammar. Very unexpected start and passing of someone, a bit confused but I do like the story. Although the author said they wouldn't dwell much into the VR aspect, I would like to see it be a somewhat important part of the story if it isn't going to be.

thank god I was so confused

no worries ^_^

And not to forget, the chapters are meaty and long!

Really like this book! The first chapter definitely hooked me in, I feel bad for the guy who got his head obliterated... The quality is amazing and I love how the story is going as of now. There's a lot of detail and the words aren't re-used numerous times. The beginning is far from lame, and the author did a good job of creating this book. The characters aren't lame and I like the relationship between the MC and Neza. Can't wait to see how the story develops ^_^

I definitely got interested, and the type of book (at the beginning at least) is something I don't read at all but that didn't stop me from liking it. Unfortunately, it only updates on Sundays and Saturdays but the good thing is that it constantly updates on those two days (it seems). The characters are likable and unique, the beginning reminded me of some horror movie the way they met a weird man and went through a forest to find their grandma lol. The writing quality is good, I didn't notice any grammatical injuries or such. Definitely something I would read after I read my current novel ^_^

A) well there are shamans so I the possibility of ghosts existing is high imo

9/10 chance they get murdered here tbh

collapsing after four minutes is something else..

always gotta be prepared

thanks for pointing that out

1st chapter was great! 100% Hooked me in, and with one damn annoying cliffhanger, I was actually looking forward to the next chapter. The writing quality is extremely good, Also the first time I've ever seen someone live up to their username... Although in an unfortunate way.

Like any author, I'm giving my shameful 5 star review. For anyone who likes a more non-cliche approach, where the MC isn't a power fiend who is far too talented for his age, cruel to those who deserve it and is strong to the point he can win battles but not superly OP where he is just unbeatable, this is your story! This is my 2nd novel, although I'd like to say first considering my first one only has 25 chapters, and there were plenty of things I implemented early on which I regret and would just mess everything. For anyone here on this novel, thank you! I'm also fairly new to writing, so any pointers or feedback would help plenty. Thank you!

Obviously I have to give myself 5 stars. To anyone reading this, thank you! I'm primarily writing because I want to, but sometimes that motivation runs out and randomly comes back. So if sometimes I randomly disappear for a few weeks... You know why. Also, I don't mind reviews if they're harsh and give me feedback/pointers, any are accepted! Side Note: This is the first novel I've ever written so it will be a rough ride, if you do end up sticking with me, thank you.

One girl.

You are right; It's not logical that he lets his classmates die but rescues a random baby. I was going to talk more about his school and his experiences to make sense, but I didn't. However, I see I should, so thank you for letting me know. And I was planning to talk about his backstory and why he could kill someone with no remorse, just wasn't now. And as for Dorian being aware of the betrayal and doing nothing about it, he's cocky. He thinks he'll be able to 100% beat Jason. Thank you for reading and letting me know some things that don't have sense.

Thank you for the compliment, and indeed he is fast to adapt, however I can't really show that off atm.

Jason claimed his first human life- one of many, woohoo!

For anyone reading this, thank you! This is my first novel, and I'm fairly new to writing. So anyone who is willing to stick around with me for a long time, thank you! Any tips/pointers will be greatly appreciated.