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Zyusa

Zyusa

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2022-09-21 JoinedUnited States
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  • Zyusa
    Zyusa2 years ago
    Posted

    I definitely like this book. It has great writing quality and I didn't notice any mistakes spelling-wise, same with grammar. Very unexpected start and passing of someone, a bit confused but I do like the story. Although the author said they wouldn't dwell much into the VR aspect, I would like to see it be a somewhat important part of the story if it isn't going to be.

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  • Zyusa
    Zyusa2 years ago
    Commented

    thank god I was so confused

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  • Zyusa
    Zyusa2 years ago
    Replied to Daoist866791

    no worries ^_^

  • Zyusa
    Zyusa2 years ago
    Replied to Zyusa

    And not to forget, the chapters are meaty and long!

  • Zyusa
    Zyusa2 years ago
    Posted

    Really like this book! The first chapter definitely hooked me in, I feel bad for the guy who got his head obliterated... The quality is amazing and I love how the story is going as of now. There's a lot of detail and the words aren't re-used numerous times. The beginning is far from lame, and the author did a good job of creating this book. The characters aren't lame and I like the relationship between the MC and Neza. Can't wait to see how the story develops ^_^

  • Zyusa
    Zyusa2 years ago
    Posted

    I definitely got interested, and the type of book (at the beginning at least) is something I don't read at all but that didn't stop me from liking it. Unfortunately, it only updates on Sundays and Saturdays but the good thing is that it constantly updates on those two days (it seems). The characters are likable and unique, the beginning reminded me of some horror movie the way they met a weird man and went through a forest to find their grandma lol. The writing quality is good, I didn't notice any grammatical injuries or such. Definitely something I would read after I read my current novel ^_^

  • Zyusa
    Zyusa2 years ago
    Commented

    A) well there are shamans so I the possibility of ghosts existing is high imo

  • Zyusa
    Zyusa2 years ago
    Commented

    collapsing after four minutes is something else..

  • Zyusa
    Zyusa2 years ago
    Commented

    always gotta be prepared

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