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Just a suggestion, if going for Kuoh Schoolmate Route. Go for Rias & Sona being First Year Students Timeline ( Gives Time to Explore much Tame themes before going into Heavy Battle Route ). Mc going from 1st Year Student to 2nd Year Senpai would be interesting outlook for Growth ( Rias & Sona going for Kyoto Trip happened early on ). Him meeting Xenovia / Irina Early On and reunion later would be interesting. So many ideas ....

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Yes. Very Good. Descriptions are great. Introducing Bennia Early on & Focusing Slash Dog Side Was Solid. The only weird part was ( for me ) is Mc's Senjutsu becoming Spirit Bomb ( not gonna lie, it came Outta nowhere ). Overall, Great Direction, looking forward for me.

I mean Mc can train their Peerage. Rias' team is pretty stacked. Akeno holding back her Fallen Side, Time-stopping Vampire which Rias refused to use, Koneko holding back her Nekosho Side, Rias plain lazy ( Born Talented ) and wants to rely on someone else. I'm pretty sure she can win on her own if she trained instead of betting Everything on Issei.

For me, It's Xenovia ( Aloof Tomboy Swordswoman ), And Rossweisse ( Demi-god Valkyrie, I mean have u seen her in Valkyrie Armor 🤤 ) . Rossweisse is way better than Grayfia, Even Euclid ( Grayfia's Diehard Sis-con Brother ) found her Alluring

Tony Stark Of Sacred Gear is a good description.

Gravity Jail ?

Compared to previous fic, this one's a massive improvement ( less edgy, more interesting ) Adding Bennia this early was definitely a hook. If you plan to add Longinus in future, then i rec Innovate Clear ( Has Both Barrier & Creation Ability of other 2 Longinus , this one would a Perfect Support Gear since your spin will add more Attack Moveset in the future anyway ). It can help you hide your growing faction in a separate Pocket World ( For Example, You just create Aincrad as your personal world )