Kristian_Kember

was a good story

May your rest in piece

if it's what you think is best then go for it. but take the advice another dude said with the rewrite being done in another book so that it's not lost.

in the comics 1 gram is worth $10,000 so this is worth $100,000,000,000,000.

wow infinite dimensional, that's pretty large considering the verse they are in.

Yo goated for the shout outs to other series.

Just started reading, seems like a top tier read, the number of power stone was surprisingly low given how good the first chapter was.

i haven't seen an update in a while, the story is good, and worth a read ovver other fanfiction (the slow pace works well with the setting of pre-one piece)

i feel this was kinda a note about the story so far, with how quickly he gains abilities. i think you did a good job showing zoro and brian having larger stats at lower levels to help ballance this, and increasing the required exp works too.

if you wanted to expand on vivi you could give her that ability she used on zoro. also great story keep it up.