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but, isn't the point of the novel that he transfered into the world of the game, meaning it should have normal physics, or are you suggesting that he traveled into the game with all working game mechanics?

ehh, well, as it turned out, some time later author explained it a bit, so it became quite justifiable, why she doesn't hate him but love him instead

welp, I seeeeeee, I take back everything about my previous suggestions. The continuity of storytelling is still really weird to me though 🙁

oh no, sorry, regarding the second part about how Mc appeared in battle, it was my bad, I just assumed that you had continous storytelling and I wrote the comment just after the 1st paragraph. After I read further I got that you are using something like backtracking storytelling, which kind of look weird to me personally.

a yo, kind of felt it again(((would be cool if there were finishing touches about the previous chapter, like what kind of dialog the Mc had with the prostitute after he finished and they separated, like some inner monolog of the female, her thoughts about situation and etc. Also, I don't for me personally mb, I think, would be more natural transition if before actions are started there were some text about how he got up, where did he decide to go, some wilderness description to understand the surrounding the actions will take place and then transition to actual combat, with the choice between an ambush from Mc or on Mc, like his initial reaction to first battle and how he gradually(or abruptly) get used to it and etc

I think you should have mentioned about turning her around, because I was so confused and imagined how tf did he make it if she was positioned from the back, something like holding the edge of the bed and then lifting both female legs, so that in the end she kind of didn't touch the bad with her body at all, and Mc was holding her by her legs around him???????

I mean..... the name probably give us some hints, no?

nah, manhwa is likely from the Korean novel The new family is so nice

what is zinger?

hmm, honestly, it feels like it kind of missing the beginning in this chapter, like it should have some introduction with initial mc's description of venice. Otherwise, it feels like the previous chapter ending is disconnected and I as a reader missed something in between.