Good stuff. Fun idea to explore. Will be interesting to see how this will develop.

Glad to see this back, thought it was dropped, happy to say I’m wrong. It’s always saddening when it happens to well written stories.

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Decent start and the writing quality is better than most here needs more fleshing out need to see more of the mc as I don’t know much about him

Very interested, got back into Pokemon recently and a dragon specialist is something I haven’t seen. Looks great so far keep up the good work

Great dialogue, good grammar and and an interesting main character. I shall wait for more keenly.

Good story though one thing I noticed was mentioning the north doesn’t grow their own food which is wrong as they have glass gardens and also the land of the gift was specifically given to the nights watch due to it being the most fertile land in the north (and also to further make the north dependent on the south I assume) which means that there are feasible areas of land for farming.

Yeah no you’re right it was some 7 centuries before the targs conquered westeros don’t know where I got the thousands of years from.

Yeah no the Martells were on Westeros before Nymeria even arrived after the fall of the rhoynar nation which was a couple thousands years before the targs even conquered Westeros.

It’s solid so far has potential to be great.

Interested in*

Already very interim this I would definitely like to see more of this.

+1

Good fic was an interesting premise shame it’s not gonna be continued. I’ll keep an eye out for more of your work your writing shows much promise.

Reading your other GOT fic I knew this would be good, though it’s still early this has me interested, keep it up!

Interesting really interesting I like Ulfs character a lot and the story is overall very well written. Hope to see more.

Solid story with definite potential, good writing quality as always, a bit slow though I expect the speed will pick up keep it up

All ready really interested seems grounded and it’s fun reading a small folk fix in which the individual doesn’t instantly become a lord seeing him grow up would be fun. Please keep up the good work but also make sure to keep the other GOT fic’s chapters coming!

This is a really good story. Ngl I dont truly know what is going on at points as I haven’t consumed amy media from the fateverse but Roman is the shit so yeah please keep up the great quality. P.s Tamamo is Bae

Good stuff love the fact you’re using less common Pokemon so far, I like Marco as a Character and I’m enjoying the development between the regions champs. Keep it up!