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Bob_Kizmet_5542

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Hello everyone, this is the author. I want to say that the fanfic starts a little rough, but I’d like to believe the quality picks up the more you read on. I’m trying to make his power acquisition realistic, and I hope you know I research most of the stuff I write so it’s somewhat canon. Though I do have to make some assumptions of my own. Anyway, I really hope you enjoy, and please rate it whatever you think it deserves.

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to KrimsinKnight

    Lol I will try not to disappoint 🫡

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
    Bob_Kizmet_55421yr
    Replied to _The_Shady_

    Thank you :) sometimes I do doubt the way I take the novel, but as long as I feel the direction of it makes sense then I’ll try and go in that direction

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
    Bob_Kizmet_55421yr
    Replied to Eddie_Russell

    Trying to but I get swamped with school work and all that. And gotta prep for the SAT 💀after that though Ill be able to update more often

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
    Bob_Kizmet_55421yr
    Replied to KrimsinKnight

    I'm writing their perspectives for the next chapter

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
    Bob_Kizmet_55421yr
    Replied to Al_Boi

    No, always had black

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to Tobirama_uchiha777

    Well, MC can’t really do that. Read the next chapter to see why :)

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to Thanatos18

    I wasn't trying to make it seem like he was torturing him, but rather putting the seal on him so he can't talk about ROOT or Danzo. Can't have him spilling the beans after all

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
    Bob_Kizmet_55421yr
    Replied to liamdenic112

    They're not. I wouldn't even know how to proceed with the story if Danzo suddenly knew everything. *shudder*

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to SupremeGovernance

    Yeah my bad, I failed to think of other senses like temperature and balance. I‘ll change it. Thank you fir pointing it out :)

    Genjutsu was interesting in that it was so underutilized in the series. It is said that you could use the five senses to control the opponent, but everyone only uses sight and some hearing. Touch, taste, and smell were largely ignored.
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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
    Bob_Kizmet_55421yr
    Replied to Caano_Booro

    Lol he doesn’t look like that but kid Shikamaru wore a fishnet too

    Since I had been training my body this entire while, I was pretty toned. I couldn't build muscle that effectively since I was still 7, but toning myself was no problem. I had sun-kissed skin since I spent most of my time outside, and dark black hair put in a ponytail. My outfit consisted of a fishnet shirt and jacket, along with black pants. With sharp facial features, a well toned body, and an outstanding sense of fashion (if I do say so myself), it was no wonder that I became the center of attention of all the girls in the class. I guess my scar also gave me a bit of a manly and mysterious aspect. But honestly speaking, how handsome could I be? I'm only 7 years old after all. Tuning these conversations out, I introduced myself to the class.
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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
    Bob_Kizmet_55421yr
    Replied to Tobirama_uchiha777

    I just meant that the paper itself had three different sections, rather than literally splitting. Seeing how confusing this is, I shall change it to a better choice of wording

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to ouragan_

    It was also in my plans to make him use the Shadow Cloan Jutsu, but to use that you need at least high Chunin reserves, at the very least. That's what gives it its forbidden

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
    Bob_Kizmet_55421yr
    Replied to ouragan_

    That's very interesting! I'll definitely do something like that! Thank you for the ideas!

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to Sage0fInfinitePath

    Yeah, but it was never mentioned how yang and yin release are measured. I think everyone has both, since they have chakra, but affinity in both changes. Treat it as if he has yang and yin release

    If I formed a nature transformation Kekkei Genkai out of earth and water, then I would come to possess the Wood Release, one of the most powerful Kekkei Genkai of the series. This was an advantage I could not let up.
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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to Dragon_Rage93

    I just meant as in had 3 different reactions, ie the paper split into three reactions

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to World_Atlas

    I do plan on making him an illusion master, but he will be much more... just like Aizen!

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to JohnWicksPencil

    indeed, the cat

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
    Bob_Kizmet_55421yr
    Replied to Tobirama_uchiha777

    Let me read up more on that.. seems interesting

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  • Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Replied to Mistigan_Reaper

    He would only suffer hidden injuries if he pushed his body beyond its limits. As for completing body weight exercises, toll is not very high. Especially since they have chakra within them anyway

    With the threat of possible death looming over my head, I would train my body and mind with whatever free time I had. Every day I would complete a set amount of punches, kicks, and conditioning so that my skin and muscles would grow tougher. This training was derived mostly from Lee, after all, even if I don't know any katas, I still need to know how to throw a punch or a kick. I also kept working on my strength training, and now I can do as many as 50 pushups before collapsing. I'm pretty proud of myself, after all, there's only so much strength a kid my age can have.
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