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Drawing is average or above average. Nothing crazy. The undead are alright but the world is bland, the only character as of chapter 14 with a story is the main character and his story is pathetic at best. No emotion when fighting, he just beats everything without worry or issue. He's amazing at magic, and at swordsmanship and just goes from dungeon to dungeon, which I could care less about because there's no story to it all. If the monsters had some personality or story to them it would make it bearable but it's just another poorly done power fantasy. And the NPCs (the one we've encountered thus far, the magic teacher) is as stale as month old bread Literally has like 2 generic lines, you have a whole world and even the names of the empires are just based on their location rather than anything significant like culture. This story lacks any creativity and is just another mediocre webnovel story.
Sea, not see
Was expecting some edge bs but this is actually quite realistic to what I would expect
Rich world with good world building, mystery and intruige, cool powering system. Main character is good, not the best, but I’m quite early in. Other characters are overall good, cast of characters is so far likeable. Strongest points are the world and the way in which your class/element are presented, not a blue screen system you’d see in other mediocre novels, but a viewing system which makes it eligible to the reader and fit in with the world well. I’m very excited to read more, I love necromancer novels and of all the garbage on this site, this is a great read. I’m excited to get to more.
Good luck with the sign langauge lol, interesting designs for sure.
Dayum this guy doesn’t hold anything
Good way to get him using a Sythe which is the natural weapon you’d expect someone like him to use without making him an edgelord lol
Warden seems sick from a design standpoint
Portraying him well, a kid from the outskirts who has zero knowledge in mages other than the stories his mistress has told him. I’m excited to see him become more competent
I love it when systems blend well with the world, it’s a tech based world so a tech based display system is awesome. Makes perfect sense, it’s good.