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So are you saying fill the first chapter with a whole lot of information rather than providing the readers with the feel of the story? This novel is not about that bro, it is about our mc exploring a whole new world, and as we travel with our mc we may get to learn many new things and information as you mentioned. The other thing you mentioned, 'grammar' I guess you have a quite unique concept of it
Hello dear author I like your writing style and the start of the novel is really great. I like the action sequence in this novel. The only thing I would say to improve is your plot and your long dialogue because sometimes long dialogue scenes interrupt the flow of a scene. Keep doing the great work. Hope for future updates.
A very great book, I really like how the story progresses, and how the character of this story develops. I hope to see future works from your side.