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You are using way to much future tense in the story where you should use present tenseshe 'would' come with tea and biscuits (it's sound *ucking stupid like you are seeing the future) why not write she entered the room while holding the tray of tea
if u want you can contact me in discord - bibasxettri 🙃
IF U SEE NEXUS INSTEAD OF PENDRAGON IN ANY CHAPTER THEN SORRY I REWROTE THE WHOLE STORY BUT I FORGOT TO CHANGE THE WORD IN SOME PLACES
do same to mine
This book is amazing, it has very good world background and good story. I recommend this book you should read it..
Alr
It dosesn't matter who does it first tell me what to write?
Sure 👍
First chapter is nice, hope you don't drop it and u should make the chapter a bit long.(Please upload frequently 😀😀).
Will mc become op?, if he will become then in how many chapter??