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    cindy_boy1yr
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    Early chapter up to 50 so frustating because MC keep talking about being slave, tired overwork, coming home late and he didnt go Resign eventhoughr he is millionare. After that chapter up to 160 is so enjoyable, i dive deep in to story. BUT at the end of the story is Meh, so meh. Just 20++chapter end story is so bad, its ruin everything damn, really didnt expect this the story, the world building, the novel itself is getting ruined just by 20++ chapter near the end. So frustated

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  • cindy_boy
    cindy_boy1yr
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    I dont know, everything is good but something make ruin everything. It just like author want to delay MC from become OP. You know, MC have everything. Superior Game Knowledge + Superior Race, but the way he grow up didnt even potrayed him. It is really like author just want to delay MC from getting stronger ahead. MC is thinking this and that much, keep talking need to get stronger asap but act slowly out of nowhere. I hope author can correct it in the future story. Story is already good, so just dont hinder mc from getting stronger.

    Last Egg: Reincarnated as a Dragon in a Game
    Fantasy · AnonymUser
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  • cindy_boy
    cindy_boy1yr
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    : i dont know u change everything from real record that make confused, the story should be enjoyable but the change of all character, world building make me confused. Did author expect us as reader to know the world author build without such explanation if author change almost everything about the football story goes? Like creating new people. How we can knew about their dominant skill to follow up the story. Really everything should be fine if author just take the real person or just make a explanation/description if author want make every player are new. I hope author try to research more about football then add that to the story. It just like random people wrote about football, not some football enthusiast wrote it

    Dream Training : The Champions
    Sports · Agis_Z99
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