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🙏 thanks

Everytime i read one line of this story, i want to to see the next. this is - and will continue to be - an epic novel. Author, great work 👏 I'm more than impressed, seriously. i love imagery, and this novel has it.

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A super nice read, guys!! Though, you might end up thinking the Author is messed up - and maybe you're not wrong - but you'll enjoy this journey 😉. Elion's life is very poignant, he gets REALLY bullied by his classmates and parent. a true loner. but his loneliness is mitigated by a "voice." yeah, that's how far my spoiling go - read the rest. 😁

the Author is just...... the way suffering and sorrow is portrayed, it's unusual. and the Protag doesn't really know much in the way of happiness and unhappiness, too. her innocence has tugged on my heartstrings! few suggestions would be: 1st, hurry and kill Jules. 2nd, i suggest you put some attention to spellings; because of the nice flow of story, it can be understood, either way, what you mean. but it has the potential to disrupt reading flow, too. it's a nice read, trust me. I wonder what more the Author have in-store.

Start with Jules.

Can he be executed now, please? 🥺

Oh, she forgot about the head and the blood, already? nice!

😬 one is going to bite the dust.

are they servants? servants tend to be arrogant in this universe.