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The grammar is so bad stop mansplaining
90% of the chapters before this point are worthless
Dun as a rock author watches to mush anime
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No progression he had Epiphany that it was the job of a Mac designer to serve the pilot and yet he never changed 2600 ch he never changed
You need to stop reaming
Is this your first fighting novel it just every fighting scene so far has been rushed and lazy or unimaginative at beast look man excluding the fighting scenes everything else has been on point although needing something more original as of this point ,it like have I seen this before. I have fath that it going to git better because you're not that bad.
Keep getting better don't settle for mediocre writing and keep on getting better
l love your Constant improvement
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