New to writing. I cannot think creatively and use different characters and make them as a insert for other anime.
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Honestly for the magic I though he would have a more wider range of spells considering he has that ancient library becuase if I remember correctly you said it existed before zeref meaning he would have access to dragon slayer and more possibly the other slayer magic. Now for the ship I would like Mira becuase she isn’t in a ship like the others, and have Erza turn into the little sister after the fall of the tower from her opening up fully to the guild.
When and where was that mentioned?
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True but that depends on if the author decides to made cleave or dismantle OP. Especially considering that he has the sharingan which could work as a substitute for the six eye… god just imagine if Sakuna had the six eyes and how developed his technique would have been.
Funny enough at the beginning of this fic and how you were explaining Morgan’s backstory a though crossed my mind that Merlin, Uthur, and Vivian were the main root of why everything fell apart after artoria’s uncle past away Merlin for being Merlin, I don’t think I need to explain this. Uthur for a few reason if I remember the way you portrayed him. He not only lied about Morgan’s mother being well but told her that the baby had gone with her mother to the after life. The the baby that Morgan was depressed about shows up and acts more like her father then a girl from that period which led to insane Morgan seeing her as uthur and not artoria. Also the fact that she was the first born and artoria was a women but she the first princess and rightful heir to the kingdom was cast aside for a stupid political play. Then vivian which could be seen as the root of Morgan’s evil ways but the. Again she didn’t for Morgan but merely saw the results of her actions from splitting herself and making Morgan go insane. All in all I see these there reason why everything went wrong after the white dragon fell. At least in your AU of fate.
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He is just cranking these chapters out