you can just use chatgpt nowadays to improve your writing

bro dont even have english as main language

thx man

thx for reading

The story is ok, because it feels poorly written dude to lack of lexical words. Author copy past the novel in gpt and tell it to make it better. I do the same thing.

Good story, the character are well made, also there are no lot of holes, I can see that the story have lot of potential. I can't wait too see out the future chapters

this is not halal

A really good story, I don't find many typos and also the grammer is good, Hope that the author keeps the story interesting as it is now in the future.

nice story dude

Im sure I checked if there are any typos, Idk where that is..

Bruce wain?

Jhon sayan?

wow man there we lot of trash comments for this, the author deleted all of them. 1000 chapters and 3m views and only 14-15 reviews damnnnn

There lot of low rated comments before, guess the author removed them. story becomes bad as it continues, anyway I started with less expectation.

bro is this a chatgpt reply tho?

I can say honestly the grammar is good and it easily understandable, no grammar issues so far. Only issue is the lack of chapters, so yea good story.

This is nicely written actually

author stop deleting comments, people are going to talk shit about it other places so why deleting it here? Story after a 100 chapter becomes boring.

thx for reading