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Are you going to continue “I Became The Novel's Biggest Antagonist”? I really enjoyed the scientist, pirate, assassin personalities, haven’t really seen the warrior/knight, and angel, despised the main personality though, they aren’t that tragic, and makes themselves out to be a victim.

Unohana zanpakuto isn’t impressive, the Shikai is mainly used as support, and her bankai’s abilities are unknown, it’s most likely manipulating blood for healing, and attacking. But don’t tell me to read the manga while spewing non sense, she died with her abilities not fully known. Tokinada has limits in reiatsu, and lifespan. Ichibei is very op but he is 1 of the 5 strongest characters, and even his abilities have limits! Such as range, his ink needs to touch! Have you read the manga?

Unohana Retsu zanpakuto is still not clarified, Aizen zanpakuto is op but Akashi’s zanpakuto has infinite growth potential which is op, especially since it only took a year for his arsenal to grow so op! Yamamoto, and Kenpachi have powerful but very simple zanpakuto. So Akashi’s zanpakuto is by far, the strongest in the entire bleach series in terms of zanpakuto, especially since he hasn’t learned Bankai yet.

Best chapter yet! I hope there is a chapter about the pov of Gin, Tosen, and some other characters. Also, Akashi’s zanpakuto is still to op, given a few decades, his zanpakuto would just be to op though if there are a few weaknesses such as incredibly bright light or his creations having weaknesses of their own, then it is a perfectly powerful but balanced enough zanpakuto.

Please author, don’t break the rules of Bleach’s system, the MC’s Zanpakuto not having a spirit is fine but hopefully this is not 1 of those fanfics where the protagonist has powers from a completely different verse or is just an outer god or multiverse entity or something like that. Him being an Isekai character is fine, most fanfics have a Isekai character that has knowledge of the story but making him more than that is just…

The protagonist is almost guaranteed to be a ‘villain’ in the sense that he will fight the Gotei 13 in the future from what I’m reading. Also, you can make the protagonist very strong but giving him an exponentially growing ability is a little to op in my mind, they are several more natural ways for him to grow in strength. Such as gaining a piece of the soul king or the hogyoku rather than it just being his Shikai ability. Cause his Shikai is the strongest in the entire series to my knowledge, and it’s a little to op for little reason.

Since this is a rewrite, I hope there will be quite a few changes than the original. Also, personally, I hope Jon, and Rob with his visions, recruits the Wildings/Freefolk much sooner with far less deceit. I just never like deceitful characters that are portrayed as noble, and honest, much like how Rob was becoming in the original. Also, it would be epic to have a dozen or so giants, giants with bows vs dragons! Southerners seeings giants, “oh fuck!”

What is freedom, it is only truly robbing them of their freedom if they know they were robbed of it, who is to say we aren’t currently in a simulation? In a dream? Or anything like that.

There’s a YouTuber called DygoKnight who makes Naruto explanation videos, perhaps watching a few of his videos will give you some motivation. For me, the best thing about your Naruto fanfic is the protagonists effect on the world through technology, newspaper, etc… not him growing in power really. So if you continue to write Naruto, slow the pace down, and have more pov of people reacting to the changes please.

Are you ever considering continuing your Naruto: Shadow of Perfection series? I have read all of your fan fictions, and I mostly enjoyed your HxH fanfic all the way through. Your One piece fanfic was ok, I managed to finish it, and there was several great things in there, definitely 1 of the better one piece fanfics. Your DC fanfic started off great but it fell off for me, I started disliking the protagonist, and overall, I ended up skipping many chapters. I haven’t read this fanfic but will definitely give it a go. Your Naruto fanfic however so far has the best protagonist yet, his desire for perfection, him not seeing himself as perfect but most importantly, to me, he is as unbiased as he can be! (Small criticism, he is judging the characters to much on their anime/manga, since you are the author, and making it more realistic, make the characters less dumb, like the Hyuga kidnapping incident.)