I would say that your way of explaining is great. But there are so many spelling errors. The story was unique from what I have read till now. Good job. Keep it up.

and there are many spelling and grammatical errors

Umm...the longer chapters would be better

Oh!! Interesting! But the beginning conversation killed few of my brain cells ×D. There were few mistakes, you should try proofreading the chapter a few times. The chapter was awesome!!

First of all let me congratulate you on surprising me in the first part. Who would guessed it was an rehearsal?! The story is amazing. The way you explain and narrate the plot is just amazing. I just want to be able to narrate just like you do. Unfortunately I have limited vocabulary. The plot got dark and then fun at some points. I couldn't read it completely because I am preparing for exams, sorry. Fun fact: I am just like the girl, with low self-esteem but I am a boy😂.

The story is awesome. it is not for someone as inexperienced as me to talk but your grammar needs a little bit improvement. My very first time reading a Romantic novel but it was awesome. I hope you could improve even more so best of luck.