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Thanks, mate!
Xp is the measurement of growth granted by doing something. It isn’t presented by the system, only mentioned and referred to when the Xp requirement to level up is achieved.
The rat’ stats were reset, the only thing it was allowed to inherit were its accomplishments
Cure poison is a spell that’s part of support magic
Thank you for noticing; I’ll be sure to change that!
As this is my first time writing anything like this, and now I’ve written a little more and thought about it more, I see the exact same problem. After I wrote a bit, I realized I might have made the mc too op, and that there was no tension. It’s easy to predict and the system is too powerful and in favor of the mc. After writing more, I also realized I made the mc too intelligent for it to be making these conscious decisions. I feel the mc should be closer to barely sentient, but slowly and slowly gaining more awareness as it increases in strength like Chesty in Everybody Loves Large Chests. The series is heavily based off of ELLC, and even a few of the scenes are inspired quite heavily based off of scenes in ELLC. Still, I find it enjoyable to write and I’m too lazy to go back and fix it, so I’ll just continue with what I have now. I really enjoy critisicim like this as I know it’ll help me craft better stories in the future and improve the ones I’m currently working on.
Truck-Kun in for the rescue!
You ever wonder why we’re here?