Luchii_Carrizo

That last idea has the potential to make Mark stop being so...clumsy?

Hi, I think you should highlight the dialogues and thoughts more, I mean, separate them. Sometimes I don't know when they are narrating, thinking or speaking.

I don't even speak English. What's the essence you're talking about in the synopsis? Will Mark always have narcolepsy?

He killed his brothers and didn't care, they were deaths he could have prevented.

Nice

The story is good, it is a good change for the basic stories of My Hero Academia.

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No sé que decir, Está god como dicen los jóvenes. Kajajakakakakajakakajajakakakskskdnxndksoowodkdkdndndndksodkdkdjdjskskdkdkdkdjdndnsksksooqlsmznxnxdndksksoowqoskksskdjdj

It's not the mc, it's the author.

Mineta reincarnates in JJK