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DawsonSmallson

DawsonSmallson

Lv11

Chapter 13, 19 R18+ label, please do not read if you're not 18+ 1st time mom and 1st time writer Thank you for taking the time to read😘

2022-07-06 JoinedUnited States
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Replied to MiaSilver

    oh babes, he's tall you should see my character notes I have on him

    She diligently finished taking her notes and packed up her things. She beelined for her car, but not before a mystery hand pulled her off course. "Hey! I figured I'd find you here, my mother is the head of this department, and I was in town visiting her," it was Alex, and somehow, he looked even dreamier now that he had settled into the idea of Lyla and was getting comfortable with her. He kind of smirked at her with his eyes, "so I figured we could go get a coffee in town, but I'm not quite familiar with the town very much, so you'll have to pick the cafe."
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Posted

    I absolutely adored the first chapter, from the first word to the last, it hooked me and pulled me in the more i read it. I hope to see where this story goes as I read on.

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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Commented

    you guys are the best

    Ch 16 Chapter 16 ~ Keeping Her Afloat
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Commented

    every chapter is a cliffhanger🤪🤪😂

    Ch 10 Chapter 10
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Commented

    being an amazing author because you're amazing 😊😊

    Ch 8 Chapter 8 - extra chapter for being amazing readers
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Replied to GoldenLineage

    Ugh I know. It's he annoying.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Replied to Emmanuel_Peter203

    Daily. They're daily!!

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Replied to Emmanuel_Peter203

    really had me there in the first half

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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Replied to Emmanuel_Peter203

    $10 says the mom leaves milkshakes outside to get him over there

    Ch 1 Endless Love
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Commented

    Really enjoyed your prologue - chapter transition. I didn't expect to be given a new point of view! Great job

    Ch 4 A King's Shadow
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Posted

    I enjoyed the read, the detail was very good, and diction was good. I can't wait to see where this goes and what's to come of the Umbras or the house of aeron. 😊 good job

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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Commented

    *these

    'I knew these cunning royals. I hate this old men who play politics while we are stormed up between the mess.'
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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Commented

    *trance

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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Replied to Eldritch_Umbra

    yeah still constantly reading and rereading and fixing errors and the flow of I wrote things😊 thank you

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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Posted

    The detail was really well written, I felt like I was watching an mmo anime. I like the different turns the story took; it made it more exciting and pulled me in to wanting to read it more.

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  • DawsonSmallson
    DawsonSmallson1yr
    Commented

    I've never really been one for this genre, but I found myself being pulled in with each turn the story took. I definitely thought I had what this would be about nailed and then it would take a different turn. I absolutely enjoyed reading this and plan to read it through to the end. Thanks for recommending it to me😊

    Ch 1 The Unusual Beginning
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