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Notbunny

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2022-06-28 JoinedGlobal
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1mth
    Posted

    Messy storytelling, jumping between narrators in weird ways, and has the weirdest dialog ever: it is pretensious and unnatural, nobody talks that way. Also the angst is so overwhelming, it's not even funny.

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    Pregnant With His Child
    Urban · Zandzzzzzz
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny11mth
    Commented

    ... Stalker alert!!!!

    "Katherine Woods, 32, born and raised in Tennessee, moved to California to pursue higher education with Matt Woods, her then boyfriend and now her useless husband for the past five years. A successful Chief Editor and sole breadwinner of her family, and the mother of my child," Henry said. "I know more about you than you think, Kate. You're all that he wants in life."
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    He Stole Me From My Deadbeat Husband
    Urban · ForeverPupa
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented
    Roman was too fast to open his mouth like a shark and took a big bite from the stick that left only a small piece at Julie's end. His face had come too close to her face with just one breath away, and her heart stopped for a moment before he pulled back and munched on what he had bitten.
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    Letters to Romeo.
    Fantasy · ash_knight17
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Replied to Zuzu_in_the_House

    What are you even saying? It's impossible to decipher what you are saying. Please, refrain for commenting nonsenses.

    'No use in getting along with my classmates. They'll all turn their backs on me in the end, anyway - especially those I used to think as friends.'
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    High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss
    Teen · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Replied to Zuzu_in_the_House

    What? Please refrain from being rude, just because you don't like what someone else thinks. It makes you look bad. Telling others to buzz off is rude!

    'That's why I'm trying to be as annoyingly playful as I can. I pretend. This way, I will be able to leave a lasting impression on him."
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    High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss
    Teen · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    this!!! someone finally said it!

    He was so angry at his Big brother for being an abusive bastard. But he was also mad at Chloe for deluding her daughter into this mess.
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    Divorced My Scum Husband, Married His Evil brother
    Urban · ForeverPupa
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented
    "Not today, witch," Vernon said, much to Diamond's annoyance. 
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    Divorced My Scum Husband, Married His Evil brother
    Urban · ForeverPupa
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    So many red flags!! Apparently she isn't the first woman he took a trip to Vegas with!

    When I walked into the luxury shops they somehow knew him, so they immediately started to make me see dresses and I felt like cinderella waiting to jump on her carriage.
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    Love at First Night
    Urban · _Elle
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    Nice place? Clearly the author has never been to Vegas

    "I have a meeting in Las Vegas, I was feeling lonely to go to such a nice place without company so I decided to invite you and madeup an excuse for your work so that you'd be covered." He explained, focusing on the street with his hands on the steering wheel.
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    Love at First Night
    Urban · _Elle
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    No you are not. If you are looking for signs that your partner is cheating, you need to ask yourself why. A healthy relationship is built on trust, and looking for signs of infidelity is not a sign of that.

    You are supposed to notice when your man is a cheater, maybe smelling the woman's fragrance or spotting some traces of lipstick on his clothes.
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    Love at First Night
    Urban · _Elle
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented
    He led her hand to touch the tip of his cock, and said, "See? I have a cock fever."
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    Divorced My Scum Husband, Married His Evil brother
    Urban · ForeverPupa
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    Translation: my daugther will find a man just like her daddy, and end up in a horrible situation as well

    No matter what happened at their mansion, Mommy would always say that she was okay and not to worry about anything because she was a strong woman. Mackie was inspired to be a strong woman like Mommy!
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    Divorced My Scum Husband, Married His Evil brother
    Urban · ForeverPupa
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    DO IT!! you are going to break her heart once she realises you've lied to her for years!!!

    She wanted her daughter to know that her father was a cheating bastard who abused her mother so severely that she couldn't even raise her head whenever Vincent was around. 
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    Divorced My Scum Husband, Married His Evil brother
    Urban · ForeverPupa
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    oh come on.. we al. know that she really only scowled and ran away.. she wouldn't dare to speak up.. all of this reads like a bad revenge fantasy, where the lead always knows exactly what to say, because she is " not like other girls"

    Ch 15 Don't Mess with the Outcast
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    High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss
    Teen · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    Pinching... pinching?? PINCHING?? is she like.. 80?? who pinches someone's cheeks in a fight?

    "I don't want to hear that from a good-for-nothing troublemaker like you, ugly redhead!" Courtney shouted back while pinching her cheeks so hard that they were going to swell.
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    High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss
    Teen · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    Show! 👏 don't 👏 tell!! 👏

    The one that followed after Courtney was the school delinquent, Maxine. Her presence is different from her - but still as impactful. She has long and straight crimson red hair and a pair of blazing scarlet irises - some striking features, indeed.
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    High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss
    Teen · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    Lady, of course they would, if you act like that around them!

    'No use in getting along with my classmates. They'll all turn their backs on me in the end, anyway - especially those I used to think as friends.'
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    High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss
    Teen · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Replied to Uner90

    Yes please! She isn't playful, just annoying 😒

    'That's why I'm trying to be as annoyingly playful as I can. I pretend. This way, I will be able to leave a lasting impression on him."
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    High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss
    Teen · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Posted

    This is a mess of a story, but not in the good way. The writing is a weird, atrocious mix of tenses, switching from present tense to past tense, sometimes within the same sentence. The author keeps intersecting little comments, that make little to no sense, instead of just describing the scene. You get no world information at all, so it's all build on this rocky foundation of absolutely nothing. The female lead is an obnoxious brat, who straight up says she is "not like the other girls", and she is right. She is rude, mean-spirited and acts obsessive. The male lead is a wet sock, that doesn't have the balls to ask the FL to go kick rocks, which would have been the normal reaction to her behaviour! This story is such a big mess, it doesn't even pass the "so bad it's good" threshold, instead it just goes straight to bad.

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    High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss
    Teen · Aciee_GelaTin
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  • Notbunny
    Notbunny1yr
    Commented

    Yup, completely mean-spirited, rude and unlikeable. Laughing at others' pain is not a good thing!

    That is until Winter realizes how much Marcellus has been sweating this entire time. He must have been so scared that it is both hilarious and pitiful. Not thinking much, she then pulls her pink handkerchief out of her skirt pocket and walks closer to him.
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    High School Again: The President's Secret Lady Boss
    Teen · Aciee_GelaTin
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