This is a mess of a story, but not in the good way. The writing is a weird, atrocious mix of tenses, switching from present tense to past tense, sometimes within the same sentence. The author keeps intersecting little comments, that make little to no sense, instead of just describing the scene. You get no world information at all, so it's all build on this rocky foundation of absolutely nothing. The female lead is an obnoxious brat, who straight up says she is "not like the other girls", and she is right. She is rude, mean-spirited and acts obsessive. The male lead is a wet sock, that doesn't have the balls to ask the FL to go kick rocks, which would have been the normal reaction to her behaviour! This story is such a big mess, it doesn't even pass the "so bad it's good" threshold, instead it just goes straight to bad.
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