Absolutely amazing my only gripe is that you should change the cover art because the current one makes it seem like it is smut.

This review makes me not want to read this novel.

Tbf Naruto was supposed to end like way earlier than expected and I felt that all the lore past during and after shippuden was a little rushed. I mean some parts feel fleshed out but still.

I like to think that the reason why Jiran is so gifted at air bending is because he embodies air ability to adapt and change showcased with his personality

Wow what a way to start. I really like how creative your premise is and how consistent you are with your writing. I’m really looking forward to more chapters

Ty for the chapter

Omg character growth!

I think a big problem with a lot of fanfics is this constant need to use power and strength of justifiers for good storytelling. I think the story would be fine just exploring failsafe as a character as they are now as I find this trope of an ai gaining sentience really cool thing to think about

Same but I like it way more like

overall the concept seems to be solid but the it has some problems such as how the author doesn't use quotations so it can be hard to discern what is dialogue well, we also lack an understanding of the characters so for our perspective they just do stuff to do stuff, a little fast paced (this one is just preference), the actually format is weird (you'll understand when you start reading), the use of emojis breaks the immersion, and the parenthesis being used to both describe thoughts, and actions as well can be a little jarring

tailed beast cant get killed only sealed bc they are all made up of chakra. They are like massive cannons that can be pointed at anyone

but it is pretty clear that our mc has no ambition, he also has no goal for the future and no reason to live nor does he have one to kill himself. so what our mc does instead is stick to what he normally does, watch movies all day on the sofa.

just like me fr

this would be cool. i like rapheal thou

please do not say he slept with little girls.

i would actually disagree. i like how the author is using niche or underused abilities in the naruto world that the original author didn't fully utilize

nah this foul