Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful, like everyone else. Therefore, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and tell me your comments My Novel Duorbis: Collision of worlds

Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful, like everyone else. Therefore, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and tell me your comments My Novel Duorbis: Collision of worlds

Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful like everyone else. For this reason, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and give me advice. My novel Duorbis: Collision of the worlds

Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful like everyone else. For this reason, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and give me advice. My novel Duorbis: Collision of the worlds

İn the first part, I explained how the story started, so I used third-person writing for this reason. İ will try to be better with your comments, which will be a different narrative in the following sections

it's really breathtaking that this story is so gripping. I can't wait to see what happens in the upcoming episodes. It will be really perfect