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Duorbis

Duorbis

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A professional author Social media links: https://linktr.ee/duorbis

2022-06-19 JoinedBelgium
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  • Duorbis
    Duorbis4 years ago
    Posted

    Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful, like everyone else. Therefore, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and tell me your comments My Novel Duorbis: Collision of worlds

  • Duorbis
    Duorbis4 years ago
    Posted

    Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful, like everyone else. Therefore, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and tell me your comments My Novel Duorbis: Collision of worlds

  • Duorbis
    Duorbis4 years ago
    Posted

    Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful like everyone else. For this reason, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and give me advice. My novel Duorbis: Collision of the worlds

  • Duorbis
    Duorbis4 years ago
    Posted

    Hello, I have started publishing the story I have written for two years. I find your story very successful like everyone else. For this reason, I was going to ask you if you could review my story and give me advice. My novel Duorbis: Collision of the worlds

  • Duorbis
    Duorbis4 years ago
    Replied to Alex_lucifer

    İn the first part, I explained how the story started, so I used third-person writing for this reason. İ will try to be better with your comments, which will be a different narrative in the following sections

  • Duorbis
    Duorbis4 years ago
    Posted

    it's really breathtaking that this story is so gripping. I can't wait to see what happens in the upcoming episodes. It will be really perfect