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i gotta say, this book sure takes me back. I feel like watching Bleach again .but anyways back to the reviewing ,the writing is good and pacing makes it easy to follow also the background is freakin amazing. my only problem with the book is it's long paragraphs, i don't know for others by for me with poor eyesight , it's hard to read it throughly so I suggest split the paragraphs and that's all. thanks for the great book
The story starts of great, The details that went into the scenes make one imagine the very clearly and so far the character development doesn't disappoint... But please, shorten u paragraphs or put some space between them, it's easy to get lost while reading such a long paragraph.Still, the story is good, so keep up the work
a 20 fold is added at the second stage, and a 30 on the 3rd stage and so on
am sorry but what's an AE
I've been doing my best to improve my grammar, I've also been told it's a problem from my other stories . but anyway thank u for honest review ,I'll work even harder on it