Azurian_Element

Shameless Author here, 😁 i gotta review this book after all it's levels above the original and i think I've been doing better than when I was writing my first book. Also don't skip the book without giving it a chance it good.

i gotta say, this book sure takes me back. I feel like watching Bleach again .but anyways back to the reviewing ,the writing is good and pacing makes it easy to follow also the background is freakin amazing. my only problem with the book is it's long paragraphs, i don't know for others by for me with poor eyesight , it's hard to read it throughly so I suggest split the paragraphs and that's all. thanks for the great book

Thanks so much for your detailed review , I'll do my best to not disappoint

thanks for the review

The story starts of great, The details that went into the scenes make one imagine the very clearly and so far the character development doesn't disappoint... But please, shorten u paragraphs or put some space between them, it's easy to get lost while reading such a long paragraph.Still, the story is good, so keep up the work

am re-writing it, also am the original author u can check my profile/account u'll still find the other book

a 20 fold is added at the second stage, and a 30 on the 3rd stage and so on

The writing is great, love the beginning of the story, makes you want to read more of it, but as an author myself it would help if u limited the use of he said or she said, but the overall plot and writing is spot on

am sorry but what's an AE

I've been doing my best to improve my grammar, I've also been told it's a problem from my other stories . but anyway thank u for honest review ,I'll work even harder on it