Kicks111

So far, the fanfiction is is pretty good. The author forgot to translate chapter 19 and the title.

I'm jealous.

it is an interesting story and at chapter 28, my only complaint so far is a minor plot hole created by the author? The main character mentioned that his communication lacrima broke while traveling and that he could replace it in magnolia, yet despite several chapter after arriving at magnolia he still has not replaced it.

The author has created an interesting story, with a clear path to increasing the main characters power. Although I have to ask, will the main character get access to the ten tail form? It would essentially be a god/demi-god form.

The author keeps deleting the old chapter when they post a new chapter, which makes the story difficult to follow. recently the author deleted most of the chapters, essentially restarting.

Will Jordan get a reward from his system for defeating the elite 4 and the champion?

There is actually a pretty good reed richards reincarnation story that started recently called superior reed richards.

The author has not posted in sever months, so the story is most likely dead. the story was decent, some parts were difficult to understand due to a potential language barrier.

Author hasn't posted in a while, starting to wonder if he/she quit posting.

Rude