Absolutely loved the story so far. My favorite part has been the main character development. The power ups are timely and there has been no inconsistency in the story so far. I hope the academy arc will be good. All the best!!

I loved this novel till the last simulation but now I feel the author is purposely stretching the chapters like the mc's inner thought for 3 chapters continuously and unnecessary info dump which makes little sense. I hope that the author can manage the story pacing better because waiting for 2 chapters with the same content as the previous ones make it seem worthless. All the best!!

why did the name of the technique change 3 times in the chapter??

the grade was rare though

level 40??

I guess readers have become sadist nowadays.

I loved the writing style very much.

The best 1st chapter I've read in a long time. Excellent 👌

The translation has gone down in this chapter.

and here goes my mood to read this novel....the moment I read him flirting with his own mom , I knew this one was not for me.

I have not read a single chapter in which the mc did not suffer. I hope he becomes powerful soon..sigh...poor mc.

The author has quite a unique way of writing . Till now the story has been filled with optimism only, I hope to see them encounter challenges further.

why do the MCs always turn stupid after gaining a powerful system ...well the story progression is quite good, I hope he matures later. Keep it up.

Is this novel machine translated or something!? Dialogues makes no sense most of the time. NO world development, and another one of those arrogant mc.

Writing style got a little better!!

The story looks promising but I guess the author has some animosity towards " " and brackets.Dialogues and system messages are not properly indicated.I hope this will be edited later.

During 1 year time skip, did he only practice a single skill? What happened to his 3 hour cultivation daily? I think you should read what you have written before posting it.

Almost zero World development story development is not good I hope too see better development in the story, world and writing style All the best!

The writing quality is good, but the story devlopment is snail paced, which is not expected from a system novel. The mc is not even using the sins properly. I hope it gets better.

Lame story development. The protagonist doesn't even use his brain for a bit, fully dependent on the system.